Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story

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Immortal Martial arts.

It is often described as the road towards endless youth. Coveted by many to reach endless time, and while some may have indeed fulfilled their wish. It was probably not important in the grand scheme of the universe, for it houses endless destinies.

Allan, a regular mortal with a mysterious father of an unknown past, spent the past 10 years learning his father's craft and experiencing the joy of youth until the brutal reality of war reached his own home. The shocking sights, moments, and secrets he finds amidst the chaos, are just the start of the path.

Even more surprises cause despair and helplessness to overlap in his mind, as his vision blinks to nothingness. A strange dark world, before a sweet voice of a girl, wakes him up.

A play of individuals of far-reaching realities forced him, involuntarily or not, to decide to walk the path of the non-ordinary, while he must try to remain himself, for his beliefs and promises, and most importantly, what he promised to himself.

Chapters are currently in the Monday - Friday schedule. 2000+ words, while the ongoing 3rd arc is around 2500 on average. Releases may differ weekly because of IRL stuff {job} I post comments about scheduling on a weekly basis through my most recent releases in the author's notes.

So far, the only place I upload on RoyalRoad.com. With the second, place being on scribblehub

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BIG NOTE! This story has depictions of gore and trauma, with descriptions of blood and death. It is described in detail since I am a sadistic author who likes to see my MC or other characters suffer. Just joking! No. No. Just expect a not-so-pleasant world, since it is brutal out there.

Profanities are whatever at this point. English has not that many of them anyway, but my usage of them is... considerable.

What you will find here are the following points in parts of the arcs. Some have them, others don't.

- Story from a mortal perspective, with the premise of going against the bigger picture. Good old xianxia, but not as stereotypical as well.

- No harem as I don't like it as a reader that much and as a writer... even more so.

- Fighting whenever it is important.

- A love interest that will shape the main character.

- Pets? Kind of...

- Quite a bit of dialogue and lots of character interactions. Be it the main character or the surrounding characters around him. Past tense with 3rd person style.

- Forging and crafting in many parts. MC is the son of a blacksmith. Weapons such as spears, shafts, staff, swords, and bare fists with some twists will be wielded against enemies or friends.

- War and military action.

- Cultivation in the later parts of the story as the world of mortals is not so easygoing.

- Slower pace because of all the above.

What will you, or may not, unfortunately, find here?

- Subjectively lesser quality work of second-language reader/writer of English with the hope of improvement.

- Overreaching plot that will undoubtedly take a very long time to finish. Pacing will move at a slower speed of the arcs.

- Wordy descriptions with sometimes, longer chapters. I am editing and rewriting the old chapters while releasing new ones. The base story remains the same, but the grammar-spelling and whatnot are changing... though, slowly. {hopefully for the better.

The beginning of the novel is more steady and slower-paced with a lot of exposition for plot reasons which will shape up the mystery and road of the MC.

29th chapter and upwards is a second start after the harsh problems of his youth prior to the earlier story.

Some comments and reviews about the pacing and grammar would be appreciated because there is no one I could share this with apart from strangers on the internet. Thank you for reading this far and I hope you will give this a try.

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Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 147 Chapter 147: Allan letting loose RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 146 Chapter 146: 36 letting his tonge loose! RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 145 Chapter 145: Art of striking, and Martial Arts RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 144 Chapter 144: Sarey's clever tactics, for a small price RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 143 chapter 143: Wonders of the past, future, and the Acupoints RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 142 Chapter 142: Fight, spar, and injuries RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 141 Chapter 141: Sarey's anger RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 140 Chapter 140: Caught and the conclusion RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 139 Chapter 139: Play and general Embody RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 138 Chapter 138: Against Zigmund Troutman RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 137 Chapter 137: Mission of the Tricloud group RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 136 Chapter 136: Situation of the Timeless Kingdom and Tricloud struggles RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 135 Chapter 135: Guild of Questions RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 134 Chapter 134: Feast for the mouths, troubles at the tables RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 133 Chapter 133: Griontesse City RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 132 Chapter 132: Trip to a city RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 132 Chapter 132: Trip to a city RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 131 Chapter 131: Approaching caravan RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 130 Chapter 130: Auxiliary pathways RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 129 Chapter 129: Body Whip Technique RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 128 Chapter 128: Allan's story RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 127 Chapter 127: Story and history of understanding RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 126 Chapter 126: Zigmund's change, spar and a new day RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 125 Chapter 125: Happiness within the success RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 124 Chapter 124: Method of mixing in failure and success RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 123 Chapter 123: Flow of forging, morality, or immortality RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 122 Chapter 122: Changes of the body and confidence RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 121 Chapter 121: Troubles of the Tricloud region RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 120 Chapter 120: Playful play of strange figures RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 119 Chapter 119: 18 days RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 118 Chapter 118: Mysterious shake-up RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 117 Chapter 117: Sarey's wonders RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 116 Chapter 116: Finishing the 3 pieces 3/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 115 Chapter 115: Finishing the 3 pieces 2/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 114 Chapter 114: Finishing the 3 pieces 1/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 113 Chapter 113: Allan vs Zigmund RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 112 Chapter 112: Spar against father RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 111 Chapter 111: Tough waters RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 110 Chapter 110: Failed advantage and a raging river RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 109 Chapter 109: Marshell 3/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 108 Chapter 108: Marshell 2/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 107 Chapter 107: Marshell 1/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 106 Chapter 106: Solution, the dark, and possibility RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 105 Chapter 105: The climb RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 104 Chapter 104: The second part of the training continues RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 103 Chapter 103: Awkward situation RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 102 Chapter 102: Curious case of the Soul-Fire RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 101 Chapter 101: Relief of the masterpieces RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 100 Chapter 100: Preparation to forging 3 blades RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 99 Chapter 99: Soul-fires and a figure bathed in light RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 98 Chapter 98: Material tale of the universe RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 97 Chapter 97: Inside information RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 96 Chapter 96: Wisher's true appearance. RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 95 Chapter 95: End of the exchange about the future RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 94 Chapter 94: Unexpected harvest RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 93 Chapter 93: A door to the hallway RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 92 Chapter 92: Causes and strange effects RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 91 Chapter 91: Next stage of the training. RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 90 Chapter 90: Unfamiliar Soul-Fire RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 89 Chapter 89: Shocking development RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 88 Chapter 88: Naked curiosity 2/2 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 87 Chapter 87: Naked curiosity 1/2 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 86 Chapter 86: Sharpened edge RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 85 Chapter 85: Spar 3/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 84 Chapter 84: Spar 2/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 83 Chapter 83: Serious spar 1/3 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 82 Chapter 82: A new path from honesty RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 81 Chapter 81: The effects of 36's discoveries RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 80 Chapter 80: Change of heart and Immortal technique RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 79 Chapter 79: Words of encouragement RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 78 Chapter 78: Difference in exercises RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 77 Chapter 77: Gift for the curious girl RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 76 Chapter 76: Zigmund and the precious whetstone RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 75 Chapter 75: Soul-fire, and a new stick RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 74 Chapter 74: Piece of mind and a black whetstone RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 73 Chapter 73: Destroying the hammer emblem RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 72 Chapter 72: Calm discusion RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 71 Chapter 71: Summoning with courage RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 70 Chapter 70: Brewing honesty and importance RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 69 Chapter 69: Strange core RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 68 Chapter 68: Acupoint treatment RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 67 Chapter 67: Strike, defeat, and going forward RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 66 Chapter 66: Attack RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 65 Chapter 65: Forging once again RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 64 Chapter 64: Try, idea and The Wisher RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 63 Chapter 63: Spar 2/2 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 62 Chapter 62: Spar 1/2 RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 61 Chapter 61: Sarey's curiosity and Allan's honesty RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 60 Chapter 60: Caravan RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 59 Chapter 59: Generosity amidst the sincerity RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 58 Chapter 58: Strange voice and meaningful choices RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 57 Chapter 57: Unexpected development RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 56 Chapter 56: Not so private conversation RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 55 Chapter 55: Body and the task RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 54 Chapter 54: Strange things happening within the dark RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 53 Chapter 53: Questioning RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 52 Chapter 52: Improvements for the future path RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 51 Chapter 51: Feeling fresh RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 50 Chapter 50: Naughty girl RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 49 Chapter 49: Exercises RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 48 Chapter 48: Are you willing? RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 47 Chapter 47: 36's struggle on the table RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 46 Chapter 46: Teacher and the student RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 45 Chapter 45: Why? RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 44 Chapter 44: 36's task and introduction RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 43 Chapter 43: Allan RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 42 Chapter 42: Wake up! RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 41 Chapter 41: Choices and truth RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 40 Chapter 40: Waking up the sleeping boy RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 39 Chapter 39: Quest RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 38 Chapter 38: Game of question RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 37 Chapter 37: Figurine RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 36 Chapter 36: Her secret RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 35 Chapter 35: Prisoner of a book RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 34 Chapter 34: Secret call RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 33 Chapter 33: Light of unknown RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 32 Chapter 32: Teacher and history RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 31 Chapter 31: Unwanted worry RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 30 Chapter 30: Riches beyond safety RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 29 chapter 29: Boy in a forest RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 28 Chapter 28: Strange fate RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 27 Chapter 27: Ending the struggles and a surprising meeting RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 26 Chapter 26: Unfortune RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 25 Chapter 25: Waking up in a confusion RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 24 Chapter 24: End of the road RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 23 Chapter 23: Plains beyond RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 22 Chapter 22: Fight RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 21 Chapter 21: Defeated RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 20 Chapter 20: Orb of red RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 19 Chapter 19: Finite struggles RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 18 Chapter 18: Civilized conversation RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 17 Chapter 17: Hunted RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 16 Chapter 16: Insufferable foe RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 15 Chapter 15: Fleeting moments RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 14 Chapter 14: Run for your life RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 13 Chapter 13: No choice left at the end of the street RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 12 Chapter 12: Escape from the claws of betrayal RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 11 Chapter 11: Fear and courage of war RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 10 Chapter 10: Frailness of life RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 9 Chapter 9: Mission and delivery RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 8 Chapter 8: Shocking night before the storm RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 7 Chapter 7: Mixing RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 6 Chapter 6: Spying endeavor RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 5 Chapter 5: Another day RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 4 Chapter 4: Questions without answers RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 3 Chapter 3: Spying RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 2 Chapter 2: Feast with a twist of fist RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 2 Chapter 2: Feast RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story 1 Chapter 1: Boy with a hammer RoyalRoadL
Mortal's Fate - High Fantasy, mortal's take on the Cultivation story Prologue RoyalRoadL