Immortal Martial arts.
It is often described as the road towards endless youth. Coveted by many to reach endless time, and while some may have indeed fulfilled their wish. It was probably not important in the grand scheme of the universe, for it houses endless destinies.
Allan, a regular mortal with a mysterious father of an unknown past, spent the past 10 years learning his father's craft and experiencing the joy of youth until the brutal reality of war reached his own home. The shocking sights, moments, and secrets he finds amidst the chaos, are just the start of the path.
Even more surprises cause despair and helplessness to overlap in his mind, as his vision blinks to nothingness. A strange dark world, before a sweet voice of a girl, wakes him up.
A play of individuals of far-reaching realities forced him, involuntarily or not, to decide to walk the path of the non-ordinary, while he must try to remain himself, for his beliefs and promises, and most importantly, what he promised to himself.
Chapters are currently in the Monday - Friday schedule. 2000+ words, while the ongoing 3rd arc is around 2500 on average. Releases may differ weekly because of IRL stuff {job} I post comments about scheduling on a weekly basis through my most recent releases in the author's notes.
So far, the only place I upload on RoyalRoad.com. With the second, place being on scribblehub
Cover made by AI generator.
BIG NOTE! This story has depictions of gore and trauma, with descriptions of blood and death. It is described in detail since I am a sadistic author who likes to see my MC or other characters suffer. Just joking! No. No. Just expect a not-so-pleasant world, since it is brutal out there.
Profanities are whatever at this point. English has not that many of them anyway, but my usage of them is... considerable.
What you will find here are the following points in parts of the arcs. Some have them, others don't.
- Story from a mortal perspective, with the premise of going against the bigger picture. Good old xianxia, but not as stereotypical as well.
- No harem as I don't like it as a reader that much and as a writer... even more so.
- Fighting whenever it is important.
- A love interest that will shape the main character.
- Pets? Kind of...
- Quite a bit of dialogue and lots of character interactions. Be it the main character or the surrounding characters around him. Past tense with 3rd person style.
- Forging and crafting in many parts. MC is the son of a blacksmith. Weapons such as spears, shafts, staff, swords, and bare fists with some twists will be wielded against enemies or friends.
- War and military action.
- Cultivation in the later parts of the story as the world of mortals is not so easygoing.
- Slower pace because of all the above.
What will you, or may not, unfortunately, find here?
- Subjectively lesser quality work of second-language reader/writer of English with the hope of improvement.
- Overreaching plot that will undoubtedly take a very long time to finish. Pacing will move at a slower speed of the arcs.
- Wordy descriptions with sometimes, longer chapters. I am editing and rewriting the old chapters while releasing new ones. The base story remains the same, but the grammar-spelling and whatnot are changing... though, slowly. {hopefully for the better.
The beginning of the novel is more steady and slower-paced with a lot of exposition for plot reasons which will shape up the mystery and road of the MC.
29th chapter and upwards is a second start after the harsh problems of his youth prior to the earlier story.
Some comments and reviews about the pacing and grammar would be appreciated because there is no one I could share this with apart from strangers on the internet. Thank you for reading this far and I hope you will give this a try.
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Mortal's fate | 115 | Chapter 115: Finishing the 3 pieces 2/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 114 | Chapter 114: Finishing the 3 pieces 1/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 113 | Chapter 113: Allan vs Zigmund | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 112 | Chapter 112: Spar against father | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 111 | Chapter 111: Tough waters | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 110 | Chapter 110: Failed advantage and a raging river | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 109 | Chapter 109: Marshell 3/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 108 | Chapter 108: Marshell 2/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 107 | Chapter 107: Marshell 1/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 106 | Chapter 106: Marshell 1/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 106 | Chapter 106: Solution, the dark, and possibility | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 105 | Chapter 105: The climb | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 105 | Chapter 105: Solution, the dark, and possibility | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 104 | Chapter 104: The second part of the training continues | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 103 | Chapter 103: Awkward situation | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 102 | Chapter 102: Curious case of the Soul-Fire | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 101 | Chapter 101: Relief of the masterpieces | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 100 | Chapter 100: Preparation to forging 3 blades | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 99 | Chapter 99: Soul-fires and a figure bathed in light | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 98 | Chapter 98: Material tale of the universe | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 97 | Chapter 97: Inside information | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 96 | Chapter 96: Wisher's true appearance. | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 95 | Chapter 95: End of the exchange about the future | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 94 | Chapter 94: Unexpected harvest | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 93 | Chapter 93: A door to the hallway | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 92 | Chapter 92: Causes and strange effects | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 91 | Chapter 91: Next stage of the training. | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 90 | Chapter 90: Unfamiliar Soul-Fire | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 89 | Chapter 89: Shocking development | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 88 | Chapter 88: Naked curiosity 2/2 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 87 | Chapter 87: Naked curiosity 1/2 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 86 | Chapter 86: Sharpened edge | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 85 | Chapter 85: Spar 3/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 84 | Chapter 84: Spar 2/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 83 | Chapter 83: Serious spar 1/3 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 82 | Chapter 82: A new path from honesty | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 81 | Chapter 81: The effects of 36's discoveries | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 80 | Chapter 80: Change of heart and Immortal technique | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 79 | Chapter 79: Words of encouragement | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 78 | Chapter 78: Difference in exercises | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 77 | Chapter 77: Gift for the curious girl | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 76 | Chapter 76: Zigmund and the precious whetstone | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 75 | Chapter 75: Soul-fire, and a new stick | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 74 | Chapter 74: Piece of mind and a black whetstone | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 73 | Chapter 73: Destroying the hammer emblem | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 73 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 72 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 72 | Chapter 72: Calm discusion | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 71 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 71 | Chapter 71: Summoning with courage | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 70 | Chapter 70: Brewing honesty and importance | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 70 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 69 | Chapter 69: Strange core | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 69 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 68 | Chapter 68: Acupoint treatment | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 68 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 67 | Chapter 67: Strike, defeat, and going forward | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 67 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 66 | Chapter 66: Attack | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 66 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 65 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 65 | Chapter 65: Forging once again | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 64 | Chapter 64: Try, idea and The Wisher | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 64 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 63 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 63 | Chapter 63: Spar 2/2 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 63 | Chapter 63: Try, idea and The Wisher | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 62 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 62 | Chapter 62: Spar 1/2 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 61 | Chapter 61: Sarey's curiosity and Allan's honesty | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 61 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 61 | Chapter 61: Sarey's curiosity and Allan's honesty | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 60 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 60 | Chapter 60: Caravan | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 60 | Chapter 60: Caravan | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 59 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 59 | Chapter 59: Generosity amidst the sincerity | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 59 | Chapter 59: Generosity amidst the sincerity | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 58 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 58 | Chapter 58: Strange voice and meaningful choices | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 57 | Chapter 57: Unexpected development | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 57 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 57 | Chapter 57: Unexpected development | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 56 | Chapter 56: Not so private conversation | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 56 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 56 | Chapter 56: Not so private conversation | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 55 | Chapter 55: Body and the task | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 55 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 55 | Chapter 55: Body and the task | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 54 | Chapter 54: Strange things happening within the dark | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 54 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 53 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 53 | Chapter 53: Questioning | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 52 | Chapter 52: Improvements for the future path | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 52 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 51 | Chapter 51: Feeling fresh | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 50 | Chapter 50: Naughty girl | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 50 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 49 | Chapter 49: Exercises | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 49 | Chapter 49: Exercises | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 49 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 48 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 48 | Chapter 48: Are you willing? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 48 | Chapter 48: Are you willing? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 47 | Chapter 47: 36's struggle on the table | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 47 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 47 | Chapter 47: 36's struggle on the table | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 46 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 46 | Chapter 46: Teacher and the student | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 45 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 45 | Chapter 45: Why? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 45 | Chapter 45: Why? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 44 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 44 | Chapter 44: 36's task and introduction | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 43 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 43 | Chapter 43: Allan | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 42 | Chapter 42: Wake up! | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 42 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 41 | Chapter 41: Choices and truth | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 41 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 40 | Chapter 40: Waking up the sleeping boy | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 40 | Chapter 40: Waking up the sleeping boy | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 40 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 39 | Chapter 39: Quest | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 39 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 38 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 38 | Chapter 38: Game of question | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 37 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 37 | Chapter 37: Figurine | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 37 | Chapter 37: Figurine | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 36 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 36 | Chapter 36: Her secret | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 35 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 35 | Chapter 35: Prisoner of a book | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 34 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 34 | Chapter 34: Secret call | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 33 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 33 | Chapter 33: Light of unknown | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 33 | Chapter 33: Light of unknown | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 32 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 32 | Chapter 32: Teacher and history | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 32 | Chapter 32: Teacher and history | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 31 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 31 | Chapter 31: Unwanted worry | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 31 | Chapter 31: Unwanted worry | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 30 | Chapter 30: Riches beyond safety | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 30 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 29 | chapter 29: Boy in a forest | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 29 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 28 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 28 | Chapter 28: Strange fate | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 27 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 27 | Chapter 27: Ending the struggles and a surprising meeting | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 26 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 26 | Chapter 26: Unfortune | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 25 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 25 | Chapter 25: Waking up in a confusion | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 24 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 24 | Chapter 24: End of the road | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 23 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 23 | 23- Plains beyond | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 23 | Chapter 23: Plains beyond | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 22 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 22 | Chapter 22: Fight | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 21 | 21- Fight! | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 21 | Chapter 21: Defeated | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 21 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 20 | Chapter 20: Orb of red | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 20 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 19 | Chapter 19: Finite struggles | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 19 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 18 | Chapter 18: Civilized conversation | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 18 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 17 | 17-Hunted | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 17 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 17 | Chapter 17: Hunted | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 16 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 16 | Chapter 16: Insufferable foe | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 15 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 15 | Chapter 15: Fleeting moments | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 14 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 14 | Chapter 14: Run for your life | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 13 | 13- No choice left at the end of the street | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 13 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 13 | Chapter 13: No choice left at the end of the street | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 12 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 12 | Chapter 12: Escape from the claws of betrayal | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 11 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 11 | Chapter 11: Fear and courage of war | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 10 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 10 | Chapter 10: Frailness of life | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 9 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 9 | Chapter 9: Mission and delivery | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 8 | Chapter 8: Shocking night before the storm | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 8 | Chapter 8: Shocking night before the storm | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 7 | Chapter 7: Mixing | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 6 | Chapter 6: Spying endeavor | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 6 | Chapter 6: Spying endeavor | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 5 | Chapter 5: Another day | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 4 | 4- Spying | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 4 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Mortal's fate | 4 | Chapter 4: Questions without answers | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 3 | Chapter 3: Spying | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 2 | 2- Feast | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 2 | Chapter 2: Feast | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 1 | 1 Boy with a hammer | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | 1 | Chapter 1: Boy with a hammer | RoyalRoadL | |
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Mortal's fate | Anouncement, worry and poll | RoyalRoadL | ||
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Mortal's fate | Prologue | RoyalRoadL | ||
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Mortal's fate | 0 Prologue | RoyalRoadL | ||
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Mortal's fate | 0 Prologue | RoyalRoadL | ||
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Mortal's fate | Anouncement, worry and poll | RoyalRoadL |