Travel forward followers of the path
To break the gate and avoid my wrath
so perceiver through the trials ahead
If you are not careful, you'll be dead
some will gain strengths unknown to those
powers titled the lidiemos
with these powers, lead the people
but be warned not all are equal
will the gifted walk the path with stride,
or will they fall to their pride
the end of every path leads to the gate,
we will be watching you and we shall wait.
As an anomaly sweeps the world, many gain strange abilities. as for Mal, the power makes it so they cannot die, or more accurately, they get sent back in time to the last place they were safe at. A power that seems like a blessing until you're crushed under rubble, drowned in sewage, shot, stabbed, all while having the royalties to feel all the pain from such fates. And to put the icing on the cake, a strange message appeared before everyone's eyes stating that unless someone breaks down the gate within 17 years, everyone will die". now Mal needs to find a way to "break down the gate" (whatever the hell that means) or they will be forced to die and revive, only to die again for the rest of time. Which would suck, probably.
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this is technically a time loop novel. the MC is chaotic neutral with a worryingly lack of care about how their actions affect people. i want to interact with my readers so give critique and suggestions. I will sometimes host polls for the personality for new characters, story decisions, and the ability to cancel annoying characters, besides Mal, if they get enough complaints. I am also impatient and will end decision polls when I want to write more. If no one votes, I choose, so don't let that happen.
if you're want world building check out hitchhikers guide to checkpoint (an encyclopedia of what I made up with lots more explanation)
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Checkpoint | 20 | CH 6: Mad Mal (end of book one) | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 19 | CH 6: Mark gets an Information dump | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 18 | Special 2: I love rats, but not snitches | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 17 | Ch 5: The Suffering of office workers, wrong doings, and a message | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 16 | CH 5: Glitch in the (my lawyer has advised me to not reference preexisting media) | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 15 | CH 4: loot get | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 14 | Rewrite | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 14 | CH 4: bad decisions are well, bad | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 13 | CH 4: Dreams of the past | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 13 | Dreams of the past | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 12 | Who in the what now? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 12 | CH 4: Who in the what now? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 11-2 | Crime spree part 2 electric boogaloo | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 11-2 | CH 3: Crime spree part 2 electric boogaloo | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 10-1 | Crime spree part 1 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 10-1 | CH 3: Crime spree part 1 | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 9 | In which the character has a mental breakdown, then plots an atrocity | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 9 | CH 3: In which the character has a mental breakdown, then plots an atrocity | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 8 | Special 1: the day when the happening happened to happen. | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 7 | Prep time makes perfect | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 7 | CH 2: Prep time makes perfect | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 6 | Forgetting something? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 6 | CH 2: Forgetting something? | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 5 | Scribble Hub | ||
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Checkpoint | 5 | CH 2: Ice cold bastard | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 5 | Ice cold bastard | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 4 | CH 1: Won't you be my neighbor | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 4 | Won't you be my neighbor | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 3 | CH 1: Real Neighbor Hours | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 3 | Real Neighbor Hours | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 2 | CH 1: Take two | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 2 | Take two | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 1 | Prologue/CH 1: Never liked gates anyway | RoyalRoadL | |
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Checkpoint | 1 | Never liked gates anyway | RoyalRoadL |