Due to a change in my writing style, which would cause too severe a change in the story I am going to silently scrap this and start writing another tale. Thankfully ive already got a base understanding of this next one, if i ever get to posting it.
Side-note to Frog: Don't blame yourself for this, as I have been told before (different book/year) of that 1st/3rd person perspective thing and forgot.
A simple mercenary, Horus is struck by a dastardly fate and perishes. Awakening once again he finds himself in what will be called the 'aether' before being thrust into a new body. Receiving his new form, he grows as a child but soon ponders the question that may take multiple lifetimes to answer, why and how he exists.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This is a story I have aspired to write over a long period of time, and while school gets in the way I try to steadfastly continue on writing. I enjoy the story, the part of laying down secrets to reveal later. Overall I hope you sincerely enjoy the book, leave a comment criticism and anything else you may think of.
~Please Enjoy