The Purple Flame

Ezra stared out the window enjoy the pleasant breeze that lightly ran through his raven black hair. "I wonder if I can avoid my future?" muttered Ezra under his breath. Fear washed over his face as beads of sweat ran wild all over his body, "What if I could grant you the power to do whatever you wanted?" Croaked an old raspy voice directly into his mind. Ezra Gulped "I'd say you were insane". Loud cackles filled the air causing Ezra's hand to clench turning them as white as snow. Everything went black. "Welcome to Konda" were the last words Ezra heard before the lonely silence engulfed him once again.

Hello there. My names Dire and I'm new here and this is my first book. I'm still in highschool so I'm pretty dumb and ignorant when it comes to the world and stuff like that.So I would politely ask that if you see anything that doesn't make sense or see any spelling/grammar mistakes that you kindly point them out. Be as harsh as you want I'll just cry in the corner as I read the comments *grabs box of tissues*. Hope you enjoy my story, I'm going to try to make it kinda cliche but take it down a different kind of root if that makes sense.