The synopsis needs rewriting,

This story is currently outdated, however it is still an interesting read!

I'm currently hard at work detailing and out lining a much better writeup of this story which will fill in many of the question marks, improve upon the grammatical consistency and help you, as the reader, have a more personal relationship with the characters.

This depiction of the story is closely related to a fanfiction of the Warhammer 40k universe