Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System

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The fully edited book #1 is on Amazon if you'd like to read and support me that way; otherwise, I hope you enjoy it!

We're into Book 2 now.

Average-Guy Tom was expecting to have a fun, and romantic, camping trip with his girlfriend Casey. That was until the world turned everything upside down and he found himself in the middle of the Tribulation. The biblical prophecy of the end times is real and Tom has no clue what to expect or how to survive it. Maybe the Bible had some clues, but if he had one of those, he probably wouldn't still be stuck down here, would he?

His only hope lies in using his head, cobbled together plans, and the Penitent System, an obtuse thing that enhances your own natural abilities, empowers you with skills, and grants rewards all for the low low cost of performing memorable Feats. There's only one problem though, and it's kind of a biggy. The Penitent System isn't exactly... user-friendly, and why would it be? It was built for heathens and comes filled with its own hidden dangers and pitfalls that will trip him up unless he can piece together enough information to avoid them while still, somehow, growing stronger.

As he faces threats from nature, beasts, and other humans, Tom must make hard choices and find his faith in a godless world. Or, at least, learn to survive in it.

What are Feats? What are the dangers of the Penitent System? Well, I can't really tell you because this junky piece of crap system didn't exactly come with a manual.

Uh hey, sorry about that, my name's Tom.

Except for the last part, the start of my memoirs came out pretty nice if I do say so myself. Even if It does sound sort of grim. Well yeah, I mean it kinda is, but it doesn't all suck. Granted, I'm still waiting for the 'not-sucking' part to pan out, but I'm sure it will.

First things first, I gotta get out of my car.

"Will you shut up out there!"

Even though Tom isn't a 'believer', there are also, OBVIOUSLY, Christian themes in this work. If you can't be mature when reading those, then please, for both our sakes, don't proceed past Go (or this point, right here).

I couldn't include it on this page, but heads up, Tom uses coarse language. I haven't decided if this is the final route I want to take, but as of now, it's how it's written. There's also some... fighting with animals. Some household ones, some wild ones. So if you're sensitive about Fido turning feral and getting stabbed... then you should probably skip this one.

I'd especially welcome feedback about tone, style, pacing, and other overarching concepts. Typos and bit-by-bit stuff? Not so much. Since I'm doing my final edit on a separate file from here. On RR I'm publishing rough-draft (single-pass through) chapters here 4 times a week, Tuesday-Friday. We're publishing book 2 here and I'm working on book 3 right now.

Chapters are typically 2000-2500+. I reserve the right to publish more or less, story dependent. That said, I know people want meat on the bone so each chapter should have progress or move something forward (beware there will be a few 'stat heavy' chapters).

How long will it take Tom to get System access?

Chapter 3 intro, chapter 8-12 access and exploring it.

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Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 3 1 (Book) 3: (Chapter) 1 | On the Road Again RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 1 (Book) 2 (Chapter) 1 | The Next Steps RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 1 35 35 | Time to Go (End of Book 1) RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 34 34 | Town's not big enough for the two of us RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 33 33 | There can be only One RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 32 32 | Squire Skillz RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 31 31 | Divine and Mortal Negotiations, aka Tuesday RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 30 30 | Here's the deal RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 29 29 | Consecration RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 28 28 | Let's head back... You first. RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 27 27 | Quik-Trip RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 26 26 | Status Digging… and Quests? RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 25 25 | Too much info for n00bs RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 24 24 | Apocalyptic Trading Sesh RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 23 23 | Class Advancement RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 22 22 | Town Guards RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 21 21 | Street Therapy (aka: 'Friendly Conversation') RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 20 20 | Intergenerational First Impressions RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 19 19 | All the worst apocalyptii RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 18 18 | Felinid Arrogance RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 17 17 | Nothing Personnel Kitts RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 16 16 | Sweep and clear. RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 15 15 | I... Need a plan. Again. RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 14 14 | Catageddon RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 13 13 | 'Day' of Peace RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 12 12 | You have that... "QUALITY" about you. RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 11 11 | Affinity Tests and other Inconvenient Things RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 10 10 | Some Information, stingily given RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 9 9 | Will is worth what? RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 8 8 | I can't really tell how you feel about me RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 7 7 | Am I awake? RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 6 6 | My kingdom, or something of near-equivalent value, for an eye. Preferably both. RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 5 5 | Good doggy? RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 4 4 | She was the lucky one RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 3 3 | Man's Hubris RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:3 | State Secrets RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:5 | What is THAT doing here?! RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:4 | The Official Tour RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:7 | Investigating in Peace RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:28 | Time to Go RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:14 | Oaths and Plans of my Own RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:8 | Seems like everybody has a plan RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:24 | Non-Consensual Guest RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:25 | Sacrificial Lambs RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:21 | Boss Bitch Bambi RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:20 | Manison RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:15 | Rats have plans too RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:16 | Proactive Measures RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:17 | Shopping Spree RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2 | The Snap RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:18 | Change of Plans RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:19 | Fork and I; Me and Fork; I and Fork? RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:27 | Salty Revenge RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:26 | Hold 'em to their Word RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:6 | Bribery and Insurance RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:10 | Suspender Jon RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:9 | Csi RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:11 | Vivi... what the fu- RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:23 | With Enemies like these, who needs friends? RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:2 | Second First Impression RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:13 Attempted Booty Call RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:12 | The Cook RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 2 2:22 | Accelerated Time-Table RoyalRoadL
Tribulation Apocalypse: Penitent System 1 1 | Average Camper RoyalRoadL