Alviona (undergoing Rewrite).

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This fiction is going to undergo severe Editing and a Rewrite over next few months. Here is what it hopes to accomplish:

1) Fix the glaring issues from Style in every chapter 1-31 (Dialogues, POV switches and Head-hopping too much)

2) Add some new chapters in and justify the development between Sofia and Anita

3) Remove the info dumps and make it more organic

4) Finalize the genres that this fiction belongs to

5) Create warning in the synopsis relating to the contents of the fiction.

6) Overhaul and show what Mira's view on Alviona is (slowly)

7) Introduce new characters

8) Show chapters the way they were intended, as clues apparently were not visible at all!

9) Make Alviona a bit more serious.

10) Make me (Author) enjoy reading my own work more (yes! :))

Hi. I have been gone for quite a long while. With heart surgery and such that has happened two months ago, I had not had a chance to log on RR due to being hospitalized. I had some other issues that the admins were kind enough to deal with on this fiction. It's good to see everything in one piece.

The synopsis has been removed. Chapter 1 should be coming out sometimes before christmas. A lot has changed. I hope for the better. Instead of edits, I have re-read every single chapter and found it to be unsatisfying. A lot did not make sense and unless you have previously speculated what Alviona is, many things she does won't fall into pieces. Well then, time to address all of this.

Ladies and gentlelmen, this fiction is undergoing a full scale re-write. While the characters and developments stay the same, it's being done differently. So much that the world should feel darker as it should have been.

For those who have stuck around and know the story: Awesome. I worked hard on this, and hope that you will like my re-write.

For thos that are new: Welcome. Give me some time, as I am super sluggish. I don't know much time is some time, but I gurantee chapter 1 will be up before Christmas.

This said, again, thank you and know that I am back. And that this fiction will be completed. AT ANY COST. I will update synopsis after I post chapter 1.

I might post Alviona (revised, as this current one is far too.... simplified, watered down, and dissapointing version of it) seperately. Those that want this, here. But I don't want to add chapter 40. It won't make sense without the backup and world-building of re-write. It will piss myself off.

Now then, let's write hm?

*This beautiful piece of art is provided by Charee from DeviantArt*

https://www.deviantart.com/chalii

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Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 39 Chapter 39 - Emotions Stirred RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 38 Chapter 38 - Alviona's first day of school turned out to be queer RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 37 Chapter 37 - Alviona's trickery RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 36 Chapter 36 - You, me, and duel! RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 35 Chapter 35 - A Meeting between Alvionas and the Core RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 34 Chapter 34 - Enrollment RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 33 Chapter 33 - The cost of Power RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 32 Chapter 32 - A dwarf with an ambition to pursue magic! RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 31 Chapter 31 - Raiding Tratmul, learning of Stats, and obtaining Shinies! RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 30 Chapter 30 - Raiding the dungeon?! Next time, be sure to be polite and knock! RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 29 Chapter 29 - Alviona teams up with Ironmight RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 28 Chapter 28 - Have some problems with a magical dungeon? No worries! Let a newbie join you RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 27 Chapter 27 - Mana is a form of energy RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 26 Chapter 26 - What is your limit? RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 25 Chapter 25 - Gearing up and setting out for adventure RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 24 Chapter 24 -Death and Ascension RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 23 Chapter 23 - It's just business RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 22 Chapter 22 - An interesting turn of events RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 21 Chapter 21 - Criminal RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 20 Chapter 20 - Arrival to mainland and declaration of pursuit in magic RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 19 Chapter 19 - A talk between two mothers, and Alviona's departure RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 18 Chapter 18 - Solution RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 17 Chapter 17 - Mira's awakening RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 16 Chapter 16 - It takes time to sink in RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 15 Chapter 15 - Let me protect you RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 14 Chapter 14 - Rise of the Cursed Man RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 13 Chapter 13 - RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 12 Chapter 12 - Awakening RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 11 Chapter 11 - Out of sync RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 10 Chapter 10 - Solomon's death RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 9-3 Chapter 9 - Not an ordinary child; part 3 - Let's play with water RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 8-2 Chapter 8 - Not an ordinary child, part 2 - Let's go out a bit RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 7-1 Chapter 7 - Not an ordinary child, part 1. Sheltered - at last RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 6 Chapter 6 - A condition for haven RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 5 Chapter 5 - An unusual meeting RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 4 Chapter 4 - A well-deserved rest RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 3 Chapter 3 - Haven denied RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 2 Chapter 2 - Complications RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). 1 Chapter 1 - A pure-blood named Alviona RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). Interlude - Zar'Hakal RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). Mistake and an update RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). Not a chapter, but a Q&A. Everyone is welcome! RoyalRoadL
Alviona (undergoing Rewrite). Chapter 0 - Prologue; When old dies, something new is always born RoyalRoadL