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<p>Teaser: I've retired for my freedom and to find peace. I was born a knight with no inheritance. What could they expect from me? —Jaino. I've tried to purge the catalyst. Is my strength not enough? —Jesifer.</p> <p>Blurb: Including his guild master, many lives had lost to end a calamity. Jaino feels guilty. Still, the first prince of Jelfyr assigned him as a higher official. This has made him hiding to avoid conflicts.</p> <p>Wanting to find peace, he accidentally meets Criselia, forcing him to accept an agreement. Consuming many lives, her demonstration has left him no choice.</p> <p>Meanwhile, Jesifer, the queen of Jelfyr, she receives an urgent report from the JSA.</p> <p>Attempting to end the battle in the wide plain while avoiding casualty, she instead meets Dandia's ruler, seeking for the strongest.</p> <p>The outside world now slowly unfolds.</p> <p>-------------------------------------------------</p> <p>BTW, since the review title wasn't edited. I have to say, my work is not a poem compilation. I'm writing fiction. But I'm not a writer, I'm just a reader. :) P.s</p> <p>-------------------------------------------------</p> <p>Story Progress:</p> <p>1. Blurb is fulfilled on Chapter Three and Chapter Four 2. Story Arc One, The Savior is fulfilled on Story Arc Five 3. Yes, there is fighting scenes. Three Calamities have been Eliminated in Dandia -- The wide island. 4. The prologue is nearing to begin. 5. Too many conflicts. -------------------------------------------------</p> <p>Past tense - When I just narrate a past without much actual actions. I mean like a news, or just telling or reporting the past.</p> <p>Present tense - Current event. And flashback with actions.</p> <p>I love flash fiction so world building is not on this story, like narrating a room, narrating a character's traits, etc. As possible, I want them to think, have their decision, etc. etc. etc. etc.</p> <p>Hallo guys, Help me locate my typos on Story Arc 5. I still don't want to edit Story Arc 1-4. I can't wait to reach story arc Chapter Six(I won't spoil). My outlines and very huge flowcharts are waiting. Sorry, about that, I can understand English without format so, each time I'm looking for typos I was hooked in my story and I didn't realize I forgot about them.</p>
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