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<p>Hey guys! I've been wanting to write a light novel for a while and finally came up with an idea.
To be honest I just want to see if my writing skills are good enough to keep writing or if I need to improve a little bit more. The first chapter does not say much about the story as it is just the beginning but I hope you guys can tell me what you think of how everything flows and about the way it is written. Seriously that will help a lot. Thank you!
The story is about a young student called Shiro which is pretty much bored of his life. He does not have friends and spends way too much time with his hobbies that are playing videogames and watching anime. His dream is to play a VRMMORPG but there is none still good enough to convince him. Finally he realizes that a closed beta for a new game is coming and in some way he gets to be accepted. But what happens when a mistake is done and he can't get out of the game?
Kind of cliché these days I know but if everything goes as expected, it's going to be really good. So hope you guys can help me with these thanks!
BTW English is not my first language so I'm sorry if there are some mistake in the chapter.</p>
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