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<p>Note: Will have to rewrite my story. Yesterday my sister pointed out to me that the dialog between characters sucks. Basically they don't talk like real humans. Another thing is that I kept mentioning names and using "Said" etc. Which totally ruined the flow of my story. Plus it's repetitive meaning that most RR regulars stop reading on the first chapter. That's why I will have to start rewriting my whole story from the beginning. I'll be changing the title too, basically I will have to delete it and start over. Again thanks for the support.</p> <p>After having lived a mundane life on Earth, our hero gets a second chance in another world. All his life Dante had followed the law, yet he ended up getting the short end of the stick. Getting killed by some criminal who kept being let go by the law was a slap in his face. Yet with his rebirth in this new chaotic world, our hero has to decide whether to remain mundane or join the dark side.</p> <p>Note: I can't write to save my life because I'm not English and I simply cannot write. So if your looking for A class writing then this is not for you. However if you don't mind the crap writing but like a fast past action novel then this is for you.</p> <p>PS, will be releasing 3 chapters every 24 hours after the last release. Timezone is a bit confusing so that's how I'm going to be releasing my chapters. So please support my book if you like it. If you don't like it please give me that 1 star, this atleast shows what I'm doing wrong.</p>
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