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<p>A lone immortal is chased from heaven when heaven's court changes hands. </p> <p>Evading his enemies, he flees into one of the few places even gods will never enter, a rip in the fabric of space and time.</p> <p>with his body destroyed, his soul persists through the whole endeavor only to be reborn as….. something a little different….</p> <p>————————————————————————————————————————————————-</p> <p>Hi everyone! As a first time writer, I'd love some constructive criticism as well as general comments about my work as a whole. This story is something I've been kind of thinking about for the better part of a few months and I actually got anxious enough to attempt to put it in writing.</p> <p>Releases may be sporadic as I'm currently in school, and chapter lengths will vary depending on how much I feel i need to write to get my point across. The tags are temporary and may change.</p> <p>I plan on using a cultivation/mana system as this will be somewhat of a crossover</p>
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