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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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<p>Enter John. Cue unfortunate accident. Welcome to a new world.</p> <p>This story is about a person (John), and how he deals with being sent to another world. Unlike most fictions he will not become instantly overpowered, he might later though. If anyone knows me from my work on DIVE, this will be different. Instead of an intelligent MC, he is just trying to get by. Of course he is given a single cheat ability to help him on his journey. There might be a bit of comedy added in as well.</p>
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<p>"Once there was nothing, and then there was something" ~Unknown</p> <p>There was once an entity, an entity that no one knew existed. Not the gods, not the demons, not the mortals. No one. However said entity was actually the beginning of everything, and anything. The Quintiverse, dozens of triviverses, hundreds of multiverses and millions of universes all began when the entity formed a self-consciousness.</p> <p>Follow the story of said entity after he awakens from his slumber, only to find out that his accidental creation has lead to something amazing.</p> <p>Notes: This is my first time writing on any sites, so please don't have any massive expectations. I wrote this on a whim in about 4 hours or so, honestly it's kind of cringy so I'm reluncant to share this on any platform. But at the same time I'd like some constructive critism on my writing so I know where I need improvements. Also please note right now that I probably wont be finishing or even continuing this story. You can think of it as a short story really. If anyone wishs to continue the story where I left off, I don't mind at all. English is not my first language by the way. There will be a prologue, And a few chapters each containing 1500ish words. And then it will abruptly end. You have been warned.</p>
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