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<p> Not a real reincarnation. Welcome to Nexus. A place where the multiverse intersects. Chris Garcia was trying to do the right thing for his sibling when he is shot and killed. Instead of his soul moving on to the next life. He is given another opportunity. Well of course he takes it. Or there will be no story. He gets some ability then dumped into the Nexus. </p> <p>He has much to learn, lucky for him, his ability brings him allies so he won't die so quickly. </p> <p>*Note: Some things will develop fast. Other will be a slow burner. </p> <p>Tags will be added as I progress the story. </p> <p>Please do NOT rate my story yet. Reasons below: 1. It's a work in progress. At least wait until I've put out 100 chapters. 2. This is my first story ever. I know I suck at writing. I have a lot of things to work on. 3. I need to work on my descriptive writing skill. I find that I sometimes skip information because it's obvious to me in my mind, but I forget to inform the readers. 4. I'm always never satisfied with my dialogues. 5. I can keep having trouble finding the right words to use. I spend way too much time on thesaurus. When I'm reading I know. But damn. When I want to use it I forget the right words. Its agonizing and mind wrecking at times. 6. I'm struggling with my character development. Sometimes it's really difficult trying get feel the character even as I try to portrait them. 7. Yeah I know. My grammar is terrible. I always find something wrong even if I edit it 100 times. 8. So yeah. I realized if I want to get better I need to stop thinking about it and just write. So here it is. This will be learning process for me.</p> <p>I do want to get better in storytelling. I hope to receive some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. I can already tell you some feedback will just fly over my head at my current level. But still, please leave a feedback. Getting a no star or 5 stars doesn't tell me what I'm doing wrong or right. Thanks in advance to anyone who took their valuable time to read and leave a few words of advice.</p> <p>Maybe around 300-400 chapters I can go back and see how much I have improved.</p> <p>PS. I have some general idea for the story, but I'm letting it write itself. So there will be no scheduled updates. Updates will come as I am inspired to write.</p> <p>This story will never go into hiatus unless I'm somewhere in Siberia or Southeast Asia sucking on my thumb dealing with flashbacks. Haha. </p>
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