2022-11-28 07:03
Modified:
description
<p>Current Novel Status</p> <p>Book 1 / Arc 1 Helpless Mortal - Done at 30 chapters {1st book is currently undergoing Rewrite. atm it goes up to ch 22}</p> <p>Book 2 / Arc 2 - Confused Mortal - Done at 60 chapters.</p> <p>Book 2 / Arc 3 - Fierce Mortal - ongoing</p> <p>Immortal Martial arts.</p> <p>They are often described as the road toward endless youth, fierce life, and unlimited possibilities. Many covet such arts in order to reach endless time, and while some may have indeed fulfilled their wish, it was not known by Immortals, let alone regular mortals. It was probably not important in the grand scheme of the universe, for it houses endless destinies.</p> <p>An underlying current of chaos is coming, and even The Above will be prone to lying to know the reason.</p> <p>Allan, a regular mortal with a father of an unknown past, spent the past 10 years learning his father's craft, experiencing his youth until the brutal reality of war reached his own home. The shocking sights, moments, and secrets he finds amidst the chaos, pain, and mystery of the Immortal figures are just the start of his journey.</p> <p>Even more, shocks will cause despair and helplessness to topple his mind. At last, his vision will blink to nothingness. Into a strange dark world he goes, before a sweet voice of a girl, wakes him up.</p> <p>A play of individuals of far-reaching realities forced him, involuntarily or not, to walk the path of the non-ordinary. He must try to remain himself, for his beliefs and promises, and most importantly, what he promised to himself.</p> <p>The current schedule is 2 chapters a week released either at the start or around Friday or Wednesday.</p> <p>The length of the chapters varies.. 3000 is the average for the ongoing arc, while 1 and 2 have between 2000 and 3000.</p> <p>What you will find here are the following points in parts of the arcs. Some arcs have them, others don't.</p> <p>- Story from a mortal perspective, with the premise of going against the bigger picture. Good old xianxia, but not as stereotypical as well. Some may even say it's not a xianxia yet, which is a truthful statement. It's a Mortal's take first and foremost, with slow progress, and no wild young masters.</p> <p>- No harem as I don't like it as a reader that much and as a writer even more so.</p> <p>- Fighting - martial arts, or weapons vary</p> <p>- A love interest that will shape the main character.</p> <p>- Pets? Kind of...</p> <p>- Quite a bit of dialogue and lots of character interactions. Be it the main character or the surrounding characters around him. Past tense with 3rd person style.</p> <p>- Forging and crafting in many parts. MC is the son of a blacksmith. Weapons such as spears, shafts, staff, swords, and bare fists with some twists will be wielded against enemies or friends.</p> <p>- War and military action.</p> <p>- Cultivation in the later parts of the story as the world of mortals is not so easygoing.</p> <p>- Slower pace because of all the above.</p> <p>What will you, or may not, unfortunately, find here?</p> <p>- Subjective quality work of a second-language reader/writer of English with 1 year of experience in writing {so far}</p> <p>- Overreaching plot that will undoubtedly take a very long time to finish. Pacing will move at a slower speed of the arcs.</p> <p>- Wordy descriptions with sometimes, longer chapters. I am editing and rewriting the old chapters while releasing new ones. The base story remains the same, but the grammar-spelling and whatnot are changing... though, slowly and hopefully for the better.</p> <p>The beginning of the novel is more steady and slower-paced with a lot of exposition for plot reasons which will shape up the mystery and road that Allan has to figure out.</p> <p>29th chapter and upwards is a second start after the harsh problems of his youth prior to the actions of certain beings.</p> <p>Some comments and reviews about the pacing and grammar would be appreciated because there is no one I could share this with apart from strangers on the internet. Thank you for reading this far and I hope you will give this a try.</p>
rss-feeder