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<p>Set in a world where cultivation is the key to Immortality, Young Lyle Welfer, a thirteen-year-old boy, was made by his father to be a cultivator to accomplish what he couldn't. Now forced into a new world where people can crush boulders with their bare hands what will Lyle do and accomplish to survive and maybe even thrive in this environment.</p> <p>The story starts with Lyle attempting to join the best school in the city of Abeseth, the Abeseth Academy for the Gifted.</p> <p>Join him as he meets new friends, foes and adventures.</p> <p>Hi, I'm an aspiring writer and would like feedback on this story. any constructive criticism is welcome and I hope to improve my writing as the story progresses.</p> <p>Be warned that bisexuality is the norm in this world so if you are not comfortable with this, I suggest that you find another story, as this might not be the novel for you. That said, I will stay away from sex scenes and would only focus on the romance side of love or infatuation.</p> <p>Schedule Release: I will try to get at least 1 chapter a week. that's all I can promise because I write slow</p> <p>I also wrote the four preludes as part of the main story but as I read the fifth chapter I realized that this could be the beginning of the book so feel free to pass the first 4 chapters.</p> <p>Photo by Greta Schölderle Møller on Unsplash</p>
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