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<p>Cultivation and Game system progressive fantasy with character development as focus.</p> <p>One, I didn't create a likeable MC.</p> <p>Two, I'm still grasping in the darkness.</p> <p>Three, I hope you give feedback so I can improve my novel.</p> <p>Four, the novel is planned to be at 500+ chaps.</p> <p>Five, I have a rough outline already of the story and I'm working with my pacing. So, it might get a little get rough and a bit forced at some point, but I'm working on that.</p> <p>Six, if the pacing suddenly uncomfortably slowed down, tell me.</p> <p>Arc 1 is Adaptation</p> <p>Mini arc adaptation zone</p> <p>Mini arc mountain</p> <p>Arc 2 is Discovering the World</p> <p>(Still working on the miniarcs, but the map is already completed. The Leveling System and Cultivation system is being extensively worked out.)</p> <p>Arc 3 ?</p> <p>***</p> <p>Living in a pointless world where everything he did only put him at the bottom of the chain.</p> <p>He was lethargic, devoid of motivation, living in deterioration, and a living failure with superficial achievements. Left behind by the people whom admired him in the past.</p> <p>Until he killed himself and woke up in another world.</p> <p>Could he find the will to live by living in a world he hoped that existed?</p> <p>*</p> <p>I ran from reality.</p> <p>I ignored their warnings.</p> <p>Did I leave them for my own salvation?</p> <p>I hanged myself to death.</p> <p>I was beyond ecstatic when I woke up in another world.</p> <p>Hoping this is my time:</p> <p>To become the center of the world.</p> <p>Unique and powerful.</p> <p>But then, even fantasy was disappointing.</p> <p>I banged my head on the ground.</p> <p>Pleaded the gods to give me something.</p> <p>"Please, let me have the will to live!"</p> <p>I wailed and cried.</p> <p>But no one replied.</p> <p>No one offered a hand.</p> <p>So I offered mine instead.</p>
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